This is the 6th of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge".
The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5.
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season.
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.
I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph. Some in contrast, others not.
To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense. Your latitude is appreciated.
Mortgage Haiku # 6
Why 17? It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them? Each one should be read and engaged individually.
You can find my whole series here: Mortgage Haiku
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Mike - I'd like to take a stab at your I.Q.
Wit and Smarts alone
Find a dog with fleas and shown
A smart man indeed
Really like your blog.
It keeps me reading for more.
Sand under my toes.
Jason and Robert - You guys are getting way too good at this Haiku thing. Thanks!
I instinctively planned to comment in haiku, but you boys intimidate me!!
Just 'cause I like March Madness, I wouldn't get out on the floor to play ball. Same applies here.