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Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (14 of 17)

This is the 14th of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge".

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5.
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season.
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph. Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense. Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku # 14

Can you Haiku?

Why 17? It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them? Each one should be read and engaged individually.

You can find my whole series here: Mortgage Haiku

Can you Haiku Too?

Posted Wednesday Mar 26

Shall I give you a ring Mike:-)

That was cute. You sure have a way with words :)

( 03/26/08 05:47PM ) — Mike Mueller

Jason - You can call me anytime!

Sally -  I really don't.  But thank you all the same.  I like this one mainly for the picture.  

So far my favorite has to number 9 or 12, but what do I know?

 

 Can you Haiku Too?

 

You are so on the money Mike. It's like you spend a lot of time on a real estate forum or something :) Seriously!!

( 03/27/08 09:23AM ) — Eleanor Thorne, Cary Mortgage Loans

THIS is cool!  Hard to knwo which ones I like.  i"m inspired!  I think I'll try this creative writing thing...

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