Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (16 of 17)

This is the 16th of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge".

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5.
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season.
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph. Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense. Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku # 16

Can you Haiku?

Why 17? It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them? Each one should be read and engaged individually.

You can find my whole series here: Mortgage Haiku

Can you Haiku Too?

Posted Thursday Mar 27

Those buyers! What are they thinking anyway?? I hereby declare that all fences must be torn down!

I'm reminded of a Pink Floyd song...love the lay-out of these posts Mike!

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