This is the 7th of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge".
The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5.
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season.
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.
I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph. Some in contrast, others not.
To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense. Your latitude is appreciated.
Why 17? It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them? Each one should be read and engaged individually.
You can find my whole series here: Mortgage Haiku
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I'm confident they will Mike, in due time....
With your expertise they will.
Again... what are 1003's??
I'm with Jennifer. What are 1003's? But I have officially given up on figuring out this Haiku thing. Woo Hoo Sally should be here.
Jennifer and Lisa - a 1003 is the name of the form that is a mortgage application.
It's pronounced "Ten - OH - Three"
Another excellent entry!
This is so much fun. Thanks Mike.