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Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (8 of 17)

This is the 8th of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge".

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5.
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season.
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph. Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense. Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku # 8

Why 17? It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them? Each one should be read and engaged individually.

You can find my whole series here: Mortgage Haiku

haiku? You can?

Posted Friday Mar 21
(03/21/08 06:10PM) — Frank Schulte-Ladbeck

I like it, and it is truly creative. I will look up the others.

(03/22/08 02:06AM) — Mike Mueller

As I look back at that I think this one needs a couple of hints as well.

If you are a blogger you should be familiar some or all of these names.

Savage and Hanan,

Dustin, Athol, Cicerone

Strange names, must be read! 

 

 haiku? You can?

 

 

You definitely stumped me on this one. Of to look these up....

Ok, ya got me on this one. I had no clue without the hints!

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